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Duane Toops's avatar

Love the rhythm of this piece, all the inner rhymes, and the steady play on words!

T Van Santāna's avatar

Thank you very much! It arrived as a gift during morning meditation.

Duane Toops's avatar

It's the best when that happens!

Nathan Slake's avatar

Agreed. So poetic and with such flow.

T Van Santāna's avatar

Thank you. I have my moments.

Nathan Slake's avatar

PS just to say I'm away at the moment and waaay behind on my reading. Don't want you to think I'm ignoring your posts 😉 I look forward to playing catch up

Jeff Zang's avatar

Very poetic, it's a well written piece. If you were to do a book of short stories this should be a part of it.

T Van Santāna's avatar

Thank you, Jeff. I fear that may be in fact what I am doing. Or one of the things, anyway.

Jeff Zang's avatar

Well, it's probably better than writing a short story about how the House of Representatives doesn't have the God given intelligence to elect a Speaker...😉

T Van Santāna's avatar

This is true 😏