You plead with me not to introduce Oxenberg Rassmuellengeri into this book, seeing as how we already have so many characters, and most readers can’t keep up with more than, say, three to five characters at a time.
"If you haven’t gotten to the mind reading stuff yet; or, worse still, have absolutely no idea what I’m talking about, then I just furrow my brow, turn back around, cross my arms. You make of that whatever you do."
I love the way you do this. The way you make me feel like I'm in an RPG, world unfolding before me.
If you do him, fish for some info first. Bait the mouse with a little cheesecake.
A bit of the old honeypot 😏🍯
Never fails...😉
"that idea for a book was born of my intense frustration with his extreme assholishness." - This! I can't think of better writing motivation!
It is, yet it's hard to stay in love with a book like that.
"If you haven’t gotten to the mind reading stuff yet; or, worse still, have absolutely no idea what I’m talking about, then I just furrow my brow, turn back around, cross my arms. You make of that whatever you do."
I love the way you do this. The way you make me feel like I'm in an RPG, world unfolding before me.
This is excellent news since this is, in fact, an rpg 😅 You know, among other things.
😆 Amazing. Unique brilliance.